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  1. #1 – which item is the star? And the vase looks heavy.
    #2 – the bread, cauliflower and flying saucer don’t seem to go with the flowers. If you remove the cauliflower & squint, the blue vase seems too dark.
    #3 – tennis shope doesn’t belong & there too many purple grapes, it makes the painting look heavy.
    #4 – there’s no theme to the items on the table. Also the lighting is highlighting everything in the center of the table. One item needs to be ‘featured’.
    How’d I do? Carol Schultz

  2. This is a ‘Ginger’s Gem’ for sure! For me “Poor Design #1” has too many stars, I would choose the vase of flowers Rule #1 to be my focal point, everything else I would remove with a possible exception of the book Rule #2, move it to the right side of the vase, Rules #3 & 4 tone down the front highlight on the and reduce the book’s size a bit, maybe add a 2nd smaller darker book on its side. I’d change the table cover to a solid using the darker red color. Last I would try moving the vase to the left a bit and crop just below the table’s edge. “Poor Design #2”, Rule 1, my star would be the flowers and vase I wish I could keep the spaceship but it would have to go along with the vase of Hops and head of Cauliflower following Rules #2 & 3. Rules #3 & 4 regarding lighting on the background and table cover. I would have to play with soften the edges of the background. To me the light seems to be coming from the front so the right corner of the background I would soften and lighten and tweak the left sharp edge near the flowers. I might try moving the slices of cake around, darkening the top slice to be more like the bottom making it a more supporting item. Last I would try cropping the image to see less of the bottom edge of the table. “Poor Design #3”, Rule #2 shoe must go, to me it has nothing in common with the rest of the objects. Now to pick a star, Rule #1, the best I can come up with is the jug on the left. I would leave the nuts and a bunch of grapes on the right, moving some of the darker shadowed grapes up and to the left. Darken the napkin’s color so it’s no longer a focal point and drawing my eye to it, or remove it all together and paint that like the lower right side of the image right corner. “Poor Design #4”, Rule #2 the anvil doesn’t help the design, out for me. I like both the hour glass and the vase of flowers. Possible try darkening the hour glass to through it more into the background, that for me would make the bread and knife the stars. Wow, this was a lot, I really learned a lot from this. Thanks – Teent

  3. Poor design #1: The single red rose doesn’t work. It draws away from the beautiful yellow flowers in the turquoise vase which are obviously the focal point.
    Poor design #2: A lot wrong in this picture. Obviously the spaceship (?) on R doesn’t belong. But in my thinking, none of the other things go together as a grouping either…flowers… cauliflower…sea sponges in a bottle?…bread on a plate. They don’t mesh.
    Poor design #3: Obviously the shoe doesn’t belong. Beyond that I don’t like the heighth of the tray in back; seems it should be a bit taller.
    Poor design #4: Again, obviously the anvil doesn’t belong. But without it the picture still isn’t pleasing to my eye. The hourglass and the bottle because of their similar shape & height seem to compete for the focal point.
    How did I do?
    –Candy

  4. Hi Ginger, Jon 

    This was a very interesting article. Thank you for this. Here’s what I think – 

    Poor Design #1
    This image has no single focal point. The three standing elements (vase, book and glass with rose) appear as one unit and the eyes just see them as a whole. 

    Poor Design #2
    Objects don’t belong together and create visual confusion. The cauliflower with the UFO like thing hanging above it, is competing with the orange flowers. Not sure what is the focal point of this painting. And then the third element (the jar with rocks) is equally lit as the other stuff, although it is not in the spotlight. It should be darker than the other things on the table. 

    Poor Design #3
    This shoe in this image obviously doesn’t belong to the scene. Other than that, this scene has a good direction of light. Perhaps the vase should be a bit smaller than the plate, so that the visual weight of these two objects is not the same. 

    Poor Design #4
    This image has a really strong direction of light. One can see strong light coming from the lower left hand side, while the rest is darker. But it’s not clear what is the focal point in this painting. What do we really want to show? The bread is out of character on this table which has very unrelated stuff. 

    I would love to read about your analysis of these images. 
    Art hugs
    Vaishali 

  5. 1 . No real star and book looks odd positioned like that
    2. Light and spaceship is off
    3. Footy boot yuk and nothing stands out grapes should be brighter
    4. Anvil not appropriate and timer is crooked no star
    So much more can be said probably all wrong but enjoyed giving it a go
    Max

  6. March 17

    #1 The overall lighting is acceptable ,my eye is drawn to the Red Rose, Red table cloth, blue book and the golden clock. These three images go perfect with the red table cloth and diffused paynes gray with titanium and white background.
    I would bring in more of a close up?
    Book lying down diagonally with edges of gold showing pointing toward the click as if just laid down.
    With the single Rose in a taller glass replacing the vase of flowers. (all lower middle table rubble gone).
    All items placed as to generate two combined angles that keeps the eye in the painting.
    The blue book title BIBLE with gold edging at an angle pointing toward the golden clock highlighted as it is with 7:05 hand pointing to the highlight as on the vase but on taller glass with highlighted rose as is leaning toward the right edge of glass, so Roses highlights lines up vertically with edge of book title “Bible” with Golden letters that run perpendicular to Golden edge, completes eye movement .
    “Save Time for the Pure and Lovely Things”
    The Turquoise Vase is lovely also but then have three Roses. But I like the simplicity of clear glass with water and single Rose.
    Everything is soft edges except the Book and its title HOLY BIBLE. Brightest light is the Golden Title

  7. #2 I like the vase of flowers, draped cloth on table without a bare section. Everything else goes. Lighting on back wall has to be worked out. Vase placed differently and lighting changes.
    Bring light in from left as shown, increase highlighting on clear Blue glass vase. Highlight on blossoms same.
    The subject of the painting is the “Light and Blue vase” and its interactions with the wall, the table cloth, leaves, and orange blossoms.
    “The Play of Light”
    For Fun you could use the UFO Tilted towards the Blue vase as the light Source with its red and blue lights ?
    Really complicate the light and shadows ? That’s not simple.

  8. #3
    This one doesn’t interest me much. To simplify I would remove everything but the gold plate and the grapes on the White Cloth placed point down under the grapes in front of Gold plate with the green leaves.
    The background and tablecloth and lighting stay the same with attention to reflections in Gold plate. The painting technique and highlights with chosen section of grapes and their reflection in the plate would be the focus area. You can almost see it now, the highlights and blues near the heal of the shoe. No title yet. Would have to spend more time developing the art piece. Something about “ Fruit Reflects in life”

  9. March 16
    #4
    This one is really crazy with the people and viewing screen in the background, who are they all, and those shadow people? Well, all that goes!
    Wait – maybe everything stays and the two glass objects and blue diffused light above goes.
    Lighting stays as is, the shadows of people on the image of the man all move more to the left as to fade into the dark background, the image of the man reversed. The anvil placed and pointing towards the man. The knife shouldn’t be pointing out of the picture plane ? “A man has to work to eat”. Take the lavender flowers out of the jar and it becomes oil for the bread, and the knife points to the oil.
    Thinking as writing, now I like it, Interesting ? “A man must Work to Eat

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